His name is Martin Purnomo . He is my good friend . Martin is good at business mathematics and financial accounting . He is smart, logic, and diligent.
First, he is smart. He can solve the problems that the lectures gave . When we ask him to explain, he can explain it pretty cleary .
And then, he is a logical person . He always think with a logical way hahaha. He can often cut to the chase very quickly, and so he can be fast at identifying what matters - and he can be fast decision-makers too.
The last, he is really diligent. He always submit the assigments on time ! And i think it's important to be a good entrepreneur . Not only that, martin can sing too! He said his second dream is be a good singer .
Nice paragraph kris :)
BalasHapusI like your article,it's very interesting.i can't wait looking your next article,please comment back.hu5456445.blogspot.co.id
BalasHapusHai krisna, it's good simple pargraph:)
BalasHapusGood job!!
wah kajee :) Martin is a very positive person
BalasHapusit will be a suitable job for him in the future.
btw you may recheck some of your words like "When we ask him to explain, he can explain it pretty cleary" better if you change it to be "When we ask him to explain it, he can explain it pretty clear"
then it will be a gorgeous paragraph
keep writing girl :*
btw don't forget to visit my blog too https://dwensblog.wordpress.com/2016/10/04/extraordinary-diplomat-for-the-better-diplomacy/
Hi, Krisna. It's an amazing article. I personally agree with you. I think it would be better if you describe more about him :) Thankyou. Keep it up.
BalasHapusMartin?! I didn't know that he is that attractive if you didn't write this blog! Thankyou KJ😚
BalasHapusHi Krisna! He is a good person
BalasHapusHello Krisna,
BalasHapusI agree. Martin is very smart and diligent. He is also kind. Nice paragraph you have there. I think the word logic in 'He is smart, logic, and diligent.' should be 'logical'. Thank you. :)
Hi Krisna
BalasHapusthank you before it, have describe my self. i'm so impressed after read it.
thank you :)
Hi Krisna.
BalasHapusI think "He said his second dream is be a good singer" would be better if you change it to "He said his second dream is to be a good singer"
And don't forget to underline the topic sentence on paragraph 1.